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And I, as usual, I didn't understand why they decided after the crash of the drop ship to sit tight and wait for rescue in seventeen days after being declared overdue. First of all, seventeen days makes no sense. If the trip from Earth (or where ever they came from) only takes seventeen days, why did they go into hypersleep (or whatever they called it). So that doesn't make sense to me.
But the biggest issue I have is why not send Bishop to bring down the other drop ship right away. Seems much more logical then waiting for rescue. Now assuming LV-426 is roughly the size of Earth (it's supposed to be a moon; why in science fiction movies are they always putting people on moons?), and the USS Sulaco is in a low orbit (so the drop ships don't have to drop forever), then a complete orbit should be about 45 minutes. So Bishop heads for the uplink but by the time he gets there, the Sulaco is out of range and he has to wait, say half an hour. That gives more time for the plot to continue.
We know the Sulaco is in orbit because they say "Nuke the site from orbit."
And, to add tension, they could have the nuclear fusion plant about to explode. Hicks could say "It's going to be close."
(Nuclear fusion plants don't explode like thermonuclear bombs, by the way.)
I think James Cameron (who wrote and directed Aliens) must be a pantser. Otherwise, he would have figured this out.
So what do you think of my rewrite of Aliens? Do you have a better idea? Let me know in the comments below.
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